Wednesday, May 30, 2018

Introduction

My name is Kade Walder, Im a year 8 and I go to Gisborne Intermediate School. I have a little sister a mum and a dad. My goals for this year are to get better at writing and reading, I enjoy doing maths at school and even in my spare time at home. I'm not looking forward to anything really, I like gaming though!
                                                        
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  1. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 12:01 PM

    Dear kade I just finished reading your writing nice to know that you have a sister you need to add chaptel on Mum and Dad

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  2. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 12:09 PM

    it was pretty awesommmmmmmmmmmmme

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  3. AnonymousAugust 1, 2018 at 10:19 AM

    Kia ora, I am Amelia in LH10from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked how you explain what you like and what you wanted to work on.
    I learnt that i shouldb do more work towards my spare time
    Maybe you could explain what your not looking forward to and why you are not looking forward to so we know what you don't like.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://gisintameliaf.blogspot.com/

    Mā te wā
    Amelia

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  4. AnonymousOctober 17, 2018 at 12:25 PM

    your writing is good but there is room to improve I think there could be more in some parts but it is up to you

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